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was born in Oita and grew up in Fukuoka.when I was in elementary school I lived in chiba.Now,I live in Kumamoto,and it is easiest to spend.
I was born in Oita and grew up in Fukuoka. When I was in elementary school I lived in Chiba. Now, I live in Kumamoto, and it is the easiest place to live.
・Make capital letters lowercase.
・Not a "spend",use a "place to live".
I was born in Oita and grew up in Fukuoka. When I was in elementary school I lived in Chiba. Now, I live in Kumamoto, and it is the easiest place to live.
・Make capital letters lowercase.
・Not a "spend",use a "place to live".
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